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Faye ([personal profile] said_scarlett) wrote2006-07-03 05:39 pm
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Ed/Al Drabble

I was working on my RO thingy, and was bunnied with this drabble. Just a small little thing, but I am rather pleased with it.

Title: Like Home
Author: [livejournal.com profile] theladyfeylene
Pairing: Ed/Al
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Full series and movie
Summary: Edward watches as the scenery blurs by outside the train window, but his mind is somewhere else.



The train rolled along, puffing and chugging as trains were wont to do. The scenery outside blurred; pastoral vistas and arcadian views. The trees were thick with leaves, verdant and vibrant in the afternoon sun. Somewhere in the distance, light reflected off of water.

Edward Elric sighed, his chin on his right fist and his elbow nestled between the seat back and the window. Alphonse lay stretched out, head in Edward’s lap. Edward’s bare left hand threaded through his brother’s short hair.

“Almost looks like home,” he said, idly.

“Brother,” Alphonse responded, brown eyes soft and wide. “This is home.”

[identity profile] 13thleprechaun.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
X3 I don't really like the movie, but I like this drabble. Elricest is a guilty pleasure pairing of mine.

Nice drabble, Fey. ^^ I love your writing style.

[identity profile] theladyfeylene.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
I like the movie for a handful of reasons. 1) Lots of very touching Ed/Al moments. 2) Al. 3) Ed and Al ending up together. Heee, it was my first FMA pairing and will always be a very special pairing to me. :D

Thank you!

[identity profile] momoiro-usagi.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww, that was really beautiful! :) EdxAl will always hold a special place in my heart, and it's nice to see them ending up together in the end! ^__^

[identity profile] theladyfeylene.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yeah, it's the same for me. For all the other pairings I like. Ed/Al is special. :D

[identity profile] redrose999.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oh how I love this!

That last line! Wonderful!

[identity profile] theladyfeylene.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad!

[identity profile] ex-mikazuki336.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, I agree that it's very beautiful. *hugs* If two people who love each other so much are together, almost anywhere can be home. ;)

[identity profile] theladyfeylene.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs* Thank you! Exactly. Home is where the heart is, as they say! *kisses*