I haven't seen this paring before, and I'm glad I peeked in (even though it's almost 4 am in the morning. ^0^ ). Actually, I am annoyed at Misa most of the time when she acts all stupid but when you delve into her character and her one-sided love thing I tend to like her. (yes, it's ironic) and I felt that Naomi should've gotten more screen time to make things more exciting.

The characterization is just awesome. You got Misa just right, bubbly but not really a dunce. Naomi couldn't have been written better (except for the fact that, well, she didn't pursue Kira for the fic to happen, but yea. LOL) And I gotta hand it to you, not much of the smex but it was hot XD

Three cheers for this fic. (and more fics to come? xD)