Oh wow, this is so awesome~ I've never seen any Death Note yuri before, which is a shame because there are such lovely ladies in this series. I'll admit I've never really thought too hard on Naomi's character before, at least not as much as I've thought about Misa; this fic has really got me thinking about her a little more, that's for sure. And I'll be checking out the links you posted in an earlier comment! I love the way you write and really do hope to see more from you in the future. :D