Haha I liked it. I know nothing about the fandom or characters, but it was still enjoyable. And...I'm curious... What IS it about? Obviously there's a war going on...

Anyhoo. I particularly enjoyed the descripetions of her. The hardness and comparison to women where he's from. Also the smell of her. Not something you associate with women, and probably wouldn't even if they were warriors, but it works so well.

Two small things!
Hyuga would imagined he would find her quite enticing.
and
Are all you Solarian dogs so full (of) hauteur?

But yes. I loved the last few lines XD Such a tease.