ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] said_scarlett 2007-03-24 03:37 am (UTC)

Wow. This was hot. I love how you write Hohenheim and Trisha. I can see why he's attrached to her, and I love how it's the 'sin' of this that tips him over.

Plus, the imaginary sex was really hot.

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