Ya know, this pairing intrigues me, and I can't understand why more people haven't written it. And then I found this ♥ Episode 8 people, hello? Unresolved sexual encounters?!
Anyway, I am....curious. Kyouya only does things if there is something in it for himself. What "merit" is he recieving by getting Haruhi to fall in love with him? Is the merit Haruhi herself, is she what he really wants? I'm not sure if that was explained clearly at all...
But besides that, really, I liked this A LOT. Kyouya being deceptive and manipulative and calculating and AHHH! You wrote him in such a way that he is utterly perfect. You also described Haruhi very well, too.
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Anyway, I am....curious. Kyouya only does things if there is something in it for himself. What "merit" is he recieving by getting Haruhi to fall in love with him? Is the merit Haruhi herself, is she what he really wants? I'm not sure if that was explained clearly at all...
But besides that, really, I liked this A LOT. Kyouya being deceptive and manipulative and calculating and AHHH! You wrote him in such a way that he is utterly perfect. You also described Haruhi very well, too.
*falls at your feet* I demand more....