I just love the character of Martel and it's terribly frustrating to never see her written, but you did an excellent job! Greed seemed perfectly in character also, and I could imagine him saying these things to Martel clearly!
I particularly liked the line 'There was history in her skin'. Very simple, and yet, it speaks volumes! <3
And wow, you did write a lot! I so need to catch up with all this!
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I just love the character of Martel and it's terribly frustrating to never see her written, but you did an excellent job! Greed seemed perfectly in character also, and I could imagine him saying these things to Martel clearly!
I particularly liked the line 'There was history in her skin'. Very simple, and yet, it speaks volumes! <3
And wow, you did write a lot! I so need to catch up with all this!