Pfft. This wasn't SO horrible as far as content, but then again, perhaps having Kimbley involved made sure I was expecting something much worse.
Anyway, I really liked this. The ideas explored here-- Dante and Kimbley striking up the deal, for instance-- are really intriguing. I also liked all the Greed mentions, especially the bit when Lust is wondering what had caused Kimbley to hate him so much. It really got me wondering... XP
"Until I grow tired of your little mind games and bite your cock off."
That also amused me. So very Lust. XD Especially the fact that she keeps her outward expression perfectly level regardless of what she's thinking. And your Kimbley was good, especially since it was your first time with him. :D
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Anyway, I really liked this. The ideas explored here-- Dante and Kimbley striking up the deal, for instance-- are really intriguing. I also liked all the Greed mentions, especially the bit when Lust is wondering what had caused Kimbley to hate him so much. It really got me wondering... XP
"Until I grow tired of your little mind games and bite your cock off."
That also amused me. So very Lust. XD Especially the fact that she keeps her outward expression perfectly level regardless of what she's thinking. And your Kimbley was good, especially since it was your first time with him. :D
Nice work, Fey!